My Journey to Publishing a Manga in Japan - Part 3

Hi everyone, here is Part 3 of my manga adventure here in Japan ☺. In Part 1 I shared my thoughts in general about making a manga in Japan and in Part 2 I told you guys about how I made my first manga without knowing how to XD. In part 3 I want you to read what I was told about that manga by the editor I showed it to. Editors have always been super nice to me but they have been very honest as well and sometimes when the meeting finished I was just so sad for what I was told ☹. Most of the time editors gave me awesome advice and suggestions, and sometime even complimented me for something, but they also clearly told me what was wrong with my work and why it wouldn’t sell (without trying to find “a nice way” to say it). Even now, after meeting them for 4 times, I am still really anxious before entering that damn room, that me and my sister call “La stanza del Giudizio” (in Italian it means “The Room of Judgment”) ahah.
Because for my first post I ended up having people answering in many different pages and I wouldn’t get any message notifying that they made a comment, this time I will ask you guys to read the original post so that I will have all comments in one place and everyone will be able to read them ^^.
Here is the link :

meamostro.deviantart.com/journ…

Thank you.